chore: cleanup debian to guix guide

diff --git a/infiniteadaptability/systems/sporestack/full-flow-debian-to-guix.md b/infiniteadaptability/systems/sporestack/full-flow-debian-to-guix.md
index 47a2c578c9b75c1a381ec1be79fe6ff3dafbf4c1..1b0fedcc6711979e075e1c914059457923c14a1b 100644 (file)
--- a/infiniteadaptability/systems/sporestack/full-flow-debian-to-guix.md
+++ b/infiniteadaptability/systems/sporestack/full-flow-debian-to-guix.md
@@ -14,15 +14,14 @@ Assumed disk layout (check with `lsblk -f`):
 | `/dev/vda14` | BIOS boot (~3 MB)    | GRUB core image (BIOS on GPT)     |
 | `/dev/vda15` | EFI System (vfat)    | unused, left alone                |
 
-The flow: **operator converts root to Btrfs, updates `/etc/fstab` and reinstalls GRUB → you install Guix on Debian → create `@guix`
+The flow: **operator boots into recovery mode, you convert root to Btrfs, update `/etc/fstab` and reinstall GRUB → you install Guix on Debian → create `@guix`
 subvolume → `guix system init` into it → boot Guix → delete the old Debian files.**
 
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-## Phase 1 — Operator, in recovery mode
+## Phase 1 — After Operator boots into recovery mode
 
-See `sporestack-btrfs-convert-request.md` for the version to send to support. The operator
-makes **three required changes**:
+You make **three required changes**:
 
 1. Convert the filesystem.
 2. Update the root entry in `/etc/fstab`.
@@ -69,9 +68,9 @@ If anything goes wrong, rollback from recovery is `btrfs-convert -r /dev/vda1` (
 
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-## Phase 2 — You, on Debian (root is now Btrfs)
+## Phase 2 — Operator boots back into the root filesystem, on Debian (root is now Btrfs)
 
-### 2.1 Verify the operator's changes and make root writable
+### 2.1 Verify the changes and make root writable
 
 ```sh
 findmnt -no SOURCE,FSTYPE,OPTIONS /     # expect /dev/vda1 btrfs …  (may be ro, see below)